Kikelomo 2

Hi People 🙂

How has your week been? For those of us in Nigeria, hope your week hasn’t been too stressful with the fuel scarcity and all? Anyways, TGIF!!!!!!!!!!

Below is the conclusion of the Kikelomo story which was inspired by a lady I met about a month ago. If you haven’t read the first part, please click here

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Titi walked into the all too quiet house with two big market bags. She had just come back from her usual Saturday shopping at Agboju market. She dropped the bags on the floor and opened the fridge to take a sachet of pure water, she frowned in disappointment as she touched it, thanks to NEPA or PHCN as they are now called, no power in 3 days. She gulped down the lukewarm water and bent to empty the contents of the bags.

It had been a week since they dropped Kikelomo off with Mama. She remembered the morning they were to leave for Lagos; how she tried to convince Jide about taking Kikelomo back with them. HE had refused despite her pleas and said they would come back to check on her the following week. Mama also reassured her that Kikelomo would be fine. Kike was still asleep when they left Akure for Lagos. Titi blinked back the sting of tears as they said goodbye to Mama. She tried not to think of how much their daughter would cry when she woke up and couldn’t find them.

She heard Jide’s footsteps.

‘I didn’t know you were back oh, you should have called me to come help you carry some of the load from the bus stop.’

‘Ahan, Jide, since when did I start calling you to come and help me carry my load?’

‘Well, I could have helped you since I’m not babysitting Kike’

Titi smiled at her husband as he came towards her and pulled her into a warm embrace. They stayed like that for some minutes till she broke the silence.

‘You promised we were going to pick up Kike today Jide’ she looked at his face accusingly.

‘Tiii-tiiii, Kike is fine, shey we spoke to her this morning and like Mama said, she is fine-

‘Yeah, I know, but –

He pulled her back into his arms

‘You worry too much; we’ll go and pick her up next week. I only wanted you to rest’

Titi nodded in agreement. Although she missed her daughter terribly, she couldn’t deny the fact that she enjoyed the break she had gotten. The bags under her eyes had disappeared and she even had more time for Jide; she smiled at the memory of Last night.


Titi woke up with a smile on her face, Saturday had finally come! The day she had been waiting for. Her Kikelomo was coming back home today. She had stocked up the house with Kike’s favourites- Noreos biscuit, wafers, a carton of Carpi Sonne and Ogi Baba*.  She also bought some provisions for Mama; she was in high spirits yesterday when she stopped at the super market on her way home from work and bought Mama Peak milk instead of the usual Dano milk. Mama had not only impressed her by taking care of her daughter but she had wowed her when she told her Kike hadn’t been ill for the two weeks she had been with her. She now nursed the idea of taking Kikelomo to Akure more often.

She also bought a pair of sandals for Joko for assisting Mama. Although, for some reason, Joko had been acting strangely over the past few days. Each time she called her; she never answered her phone and came up with different excuses. After a while, she stopped calling Joko and called Mama’s phone directly, she excused her behaviour on her teenage mood swings.

They got to Akure just after noon and Joko came up to greet them. She didn’t hug Titi in her usual manner but only knelt and collected the bags she was holding. She also didn’t make eye contact with either of them.

Mama greeted them at the door

‘Ema wo le o, Eka bo*’

They exchanged pleasantries and entered into the sitting room. As soon as they got in, Titi saw Kikelomo sitting on the floor playing with a soft toy.

Nothing prepared her for what she saw. Her eyes threatened to pop out of their sockets.

She was too stunned to speak.

The ground beneath her was gradually shifting away, she felt dizzy and nauseous at once.

She managed to pick up her daughter and traced the two vertical lines on both sides of her cheeks.

Her eyes moved from the ugly scars on her daughter’s face to her mother in law. She looked at the face of the woman she knew she would never forgive. The face of the woman who had betrayed her by giving her daughter these ugly tribal marks. What would she tell Kikelomo when she grows older, when she is teased and ridiculed by her mates?

Tears found their way down her cheeks as she mouthed the only question on her mind.


* Ogi Baba –Pap, similar to custard.

*Ema wo le o, Eka bo- Mind your steps, welcome.

Please leave a comment! Thanks for reading.

Have a great weekend!



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23 thoughts on “Kikelomo 2

  1. anaelrich 07/03/2014 at 2:52 pm Reply

    Thanks for your stories, I really like reading them. I was born and raised in South America/ Caribbean as “a descendant of the enslaved”. Your stories give insight on Nigerian society that you normally wouldn’t get through the media. Here in the Netherlands, I had seen the tribal markings on the faces of people from Ghana. I always thought the markings were special. I didn’t know (some) people thought that they were ugly and that those markings were looked down upon. Interesting, why is that?


    • Feyi's Dairy 07/03/2014 at 6:52 pm Reply

      Awww thanks Anaelrich! Ohhh you are the reader from Netherlands :)I’ve always been curious about who was reading my blog all the way from Netherlands !
      In Nigeria they are called tribal marks and were used back in the day as a form of identification and as superstitious cures for illnesses. They are no longer popular because people associate it with being ‘local’ and for health reasons (unsterilised sharp objects used in making the marks) apparently it’s against the law in some Nigerian states.


  2. Olayemi 07/03/2014 at 4:46 pm Reply

    Haa tribal marks ke. How could mama have done that without informing Titi and Jide. It will take the special grace of God for me to forgive mama if I were in Titi’s shoes. Titi and Jide have a lot of work to do to make sure that Kikelomo does not feel inferior in any way because of the marks, she should be taught to be proud of them otherwise……


    • Feyi's Dairy 07/03/2014 at 8:41 pm Reply

      I know right? Yeah it would be difficult to forgive her but she has to… Thanks for comment Olayemi


  3. Toskokat 08/03/2014 at 4:21 pm Reply

    Very nice story.


  4. Olumide 10/03/2014 at 4:07 pm Reply

    Mama is wicked and deserves to kill the bucket end of story. If mama were to be my mother? naa that won’t happen.


    • Feyi's Dairy 10/03/2014 at 11:24 pm Reply

      Hi Olumide
      Ha! kick the bucket? Why so mean? ?
      Lol I’m sure it won’t happen.


  5. Tolulope 11/03/2014 at 1:19 pm Reply

    Aawww!!!!! tribal mark??? u would see some tribal marks nd u “ll feel terribly sorry for d grateful my parents didn’t give me one.Thumbs up dear….


  6. kitty 12/03/2014 at 12:26 am Reply

    Lol, that is terrible , well, mama was only trying to help them the best way she could


  7. glowingscenes 12/03/2014 at 5:31 pm Reply

    oh no!!!!! what?!!! Feyi if you like yourself berra come and update the next episode sharp sharp o. What was the sickness sef that she had to put tribal marks?!!


    • Feyi's Dairy 13/03/2014 at 9:49 pm Reply

      lol Itunu 🙂
      That’s the conclusion oh; I think the issue is Mama giving Kike tribal marks all in the name of superstition-
      Thanks for your comment


      • glowingscenes 13/03/2014 at 9:51 pm

        awwww…really?!! So what was wrong with the child in d first place We deserve to know nauuu


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  9. imperfectlyperfect92 16/03/2014 at 12:33 pm Reply

    ah, mama! why na? ah! tribal marks..kai!


  10. toyinalabi 12/04/2014 at 12:10 pm Reply

    Wow! What an unpleasant surprise. Mama shd av asked them first…anyway it was a good read. Welldone


  11. MercieIfunanya 10/09/2014 at 7:51 am Reply

    Dats selfish and mean! Aaaaarghhh… Without informing her parents?!


  12. MercieIfunanya 10/09/2014 at 7:57 am Reply

    Ok, it wz part f d cure 4 d illness. I get it now. Mama only dd wat she knew how 2 do best anyway nd out f luv maybe; probably she dint understand Titi’s strong distaste for it.
    Poor Kike!


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